The early 'break' around :56 kinda threw me, but after a critical listen, I find this music would be a perfect backdrop to some chicks' racy lyrics.
I do think this would be a commercial success; now you need a singer and/or writer. Maybe hit up http://hania.newgrounds.com/ and http://wordwizard64.newgrounds.com/ ..you'd have to pull the female voice, but it's a good guideline for future vocals.