What an impressive story! Didn't read the author comments before watching, so the story arc really floored me. Most movies here are over and done with, within a minute (lol, premature entertainment). The more I watched, the more compelling and enjoyable it became. Action sequences and scene changes seemed fluid and natural.
Wanted to take half a star off for the way you drew people, but there's no reason to: you've improved character design and consistency, made faces more expressive.... even the clarity and quality of the audio kick butt (aside from one or two volume pops). Righteous stuff man.