VicariousE's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Joe Pesci Reads Email]

Wow. It's a good thing I live on the East coast, where talk like this happens in every bar on a Friday night... well, certainly not by a sorority sister... but I'm acclimated to outbursts of this nature.
That's one helluva good read! Animation was varied, but a bit stiff. Maybe next time, try adding a few more facial expressions or another angle of the speaker, to break things up a bit.

[Dawn of the New Holiday]

The sub-text is awesome. The farmer's wife and the shrine's voice were a bit hard to understand, which necessitated another view. The intro scene of destruction, looked rushed and non-specific, and the colors too similar (or was that intentional?)

The scenes weren't awkward, it's all about using a setting as exposition (story-telling), which you did to dern good effect. This is for the first round, right? I'd be pissed if this didn't make it. I'm proud of you man.

SwedishPlumTrees responds:

Thanks for the review. I realize now how badly some character's were voiced. Will try to work on that next time. Also, the backgrounds were kind of rushed, I agree. Will definitely take your points into consideration. Thanks man.

[Blume]

Awesome sauce. The actual animations were a little jerky (as opposed to fluid or smooth), but all aspects of this were spot on. This piece will be tough to beat. A most excellent entry Hikarian!!

[Amy]

Aside from the way too soft female voice, this whole piece was solid... (The viewer) knew it was going to be an emotional story from the start, but it was well worth watching, even though it was terribly sad.

Straighten out the audio, and this will be a 5 star rating, easy! This is work to be proud of.

[Shadow Hunter Trailer]

Only the shadow knows.... where all this will all lead. But it'll probably look pretty damn sweet while doing so.

[My Balloon!]

Bit of Kensington gore there, eh? I'd say your project was a success... it was a shocked laugh, a laugh nonetheless. Good show, the hard work is evident, if a tad short in length.

["Fuck, I" - Gamegrumps]

Yeah... another glorification of a former Newgrounder :P But it came out ok. Take some time and get some mouth movements down, work on character construction, do some backgrounds. The clean lines and fluid animation bodes well for the future.

JurriaansArt responds:

Thanks, if this gets blammed (which it most likely will) I'll probably improve this by adding some mouth movement and backgrounds, thanks for the feedback.