You both did a very commendable job! That kid's got talent, hope he calls you again!
You both did a very commendable job! That kid's got talent, hope he calls you again!
Very elemental, mainstream-based humor, but you've added variety to your work, and that helps. Some of the later sound effects were a little too loud.
A fine first effort! Excellent work on the little details, though a few more could've been squeezed in... (cracker crumbs, PB on teeth, you know) no need to waste frames. Only, do be careful about red-lining the db meter.. had some over-amplified volume crashing, when the dark side spoke out. Conversely, the little guy in front of the computer could've enunciated a bit better.
Screw the YouTube, and ride the tank of mediocrity, here at Newgrounds!
Thanks for the review! It means a lot to me. I'll definitely take more time on the next project, and try to normalize the audio better. I guess since I already knew what he was saying I didn't realize how quiet it was at parts.
And Newgrounds beats YouTube any day, haha! I just want to mirror my stuff there before anyone else does (just in case). Thanks again!
Awfully short, lacks substance, but the audio and video seemed okay, if wooden :|
Two chicks did this? About sharks? Win-win, although the singing was excellent and the production values pretty tight, it's still a cut 'n paste job, with some non-embellished areas. Nevertheless, I look forward to more unique movies from ya!
Could really use something at the end, to show who did what, or have their user icons in the individual segments. Really awesome threading all of this together, and the song is quite apt!
I love how a lot of the songs are featured on the deluxe, animated fish trophy they sold in the late 20th century :)
Damn, this a really nice piece! True, much of the action is facial (great eye and mouth movements) and auditory, but the script and the quality of the work, make this a winner. Good show!
I'm an adult, and that made me feel really ill.
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