VicariousE's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Lilith]

Nice contrast, cute and stylish! The dA watermark is kinda annoying :(

Jinx-25 responds:

I know.. I put both my watermarks in due to art theft =___=

Thanks for the feedback :)

[Popsicle?]

I like simple pictures like this. The proportions and composition look great!

LowHealthHeroesTV responds:

Thanks:3

[XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX-III]

It's far out, man. We probably all check out like that... 'when the man comes around' (Johnny Cash's last song before he died). I'd like to see what happens after /\ this happens.. heaven, hell, purgatory, the levels of saints... Nice piece, good symmetry.

[Lil succubus]

It looks good! The detail in the horns could look more robust, but it looks like a proper character! I'd like to her moves on the dance floor... she seems the sort.

[P.S.A about videogame armor]

I guess the damage to the armor could be more pronounced, the bullet holes across the chest look too perfect and small at distance.
Somehow, I picture that warning label on the top side of a huge, adult sized, clear blister pack (like for action figures). But realistically, your approach works better, though maybe the composition could be better, like a text blow up instead of another frame? Lotta different ways to do it, no right or wrong answers...

Goredorf responds:

Thank you! This was my second real time using my tablet, and photoshop to make a project, and like you commented on my first submission I went far beyond my comfort zone with this one. In response directly to the critiques, I spent over 16 hours, making 28 layers to make this one poster, aaaaaannnnddddd at the last minute before the project was due I realized I had not made ANY damage to the armor, hence the quick little laser holes. You read my intent perfectly though, I designed the "gag" to be like this guy had walked into a game store and bought a life-size blister-pack of armor to put on, and this is how he ended up. (Actually used my McFarlane action figure of Jorge from Halo Reach as a Loose reference!) Lastly, I have ALWAYS struggled with composition, and the rule of three. My current Art teacher is beating me with a rolled up paper to try and improve my compositional awareness, haha! Thank you again for the great critique!

[Splash Screen]

Hank's looking for someone to meet his special friend. She's a quiet type, but packs a wallop.
It's eerie how clean and perfect the streets and structures are; something larger is at work here...

Krinkels responds:

It'll be a game cut with a dark, eerie tone. I'll see to it.

[worried about the fall]

I can see right away how carefully and successfully this was done. Considering all the different styles women do up their eyes, you very rarely see artistic license on the eyes themselves! There's so much symmetry between the eyes, it's hard to believe this was all freehand! They look deeply creepy, and worried.

It could use some digital cleaning, sharpness and whitening (and adding to the chopped bits at the sides). Eyes seem a tad too close to each other... but that's completely understandable considering... see, you coulda fixed that digitally, if you thought it needed it.

Happy-Little-Trees responds:

I feel like adding anything digital to a piece fucks up all the hard work a pencil did be it "good" or "bad" but it really depends on the work I suppose
they arent chopped actually I just ran out of paper

[The Night Watch II]

Every artist wants to create 'the perfect piece'.

Good job man, you hit all the bases on this one, and the composition didn't suffer from all the detail you put into this. "Equality" on the right hand side poster.... nice touch.

[Combination!]

All very cute... but the horse is creeping me out, it won't let me take a nap, I can feel it staring into my soul :O

SexyFurryGal responds:

Thank adventure time~