That's groovy, the vocals really threw me for a loop, I think it's the way most of the starting lyrics are read, kudos on keeping the words metered well! Maybe one or two lines could've been more clearly pronounced.
Lyrics are a 10/10, as are the interesting lyrical intonations. Not too crazy about how the tin can effect turned out, but it's just above par, or maybe the instrumentals are so clear and sharp... but that also adds up to be a good combo. Audio engineering aside, I'd love to hear this on the radio!