VicariousE's art Reviews on Newgrounds

['Into the Nounless']

I'm already a fan...

..so why review? Considering the chaotic and cryptic type of work you submit, this piece is yet another winner. But more than that, you actually settled on a point of view, narf! The background colors look like they came from a slushy machine and were applied with the weird "scoop-straw" that comes with it (to your credit).
Can't tell if your little buddies are getting sucked in or escaping.

Butzbo responds:

At first i tried to make it look like they were getting 'sucked' (which has some relation with the title), but then i found out that, probably half of them ended up looking like they were coming out of the 'orb'. Maybe it still kind of works that way.
HEH, thanks again!

[Kasuka]

Is that a triffid or a flower..

...trying to sneak up on her! Bold lines and shading on the face and shirt... great eyes! I knocked off a star 'cause her nose shape (or nostril) looks a tad off [had to find something to complain about]. Not to worry though - all your work has a depth of character, thanks to how finely you craft the face, eyes, mouth and head.

KaiLEECH responds:

Thank you^^
Disappoint you: Kasuka - male XDD

[Rainblargharagh]

Almost missed this one..!

This turned out okay! I like the clean lines, colors and shading in the tail. Only niggle I have is the size of the forehead/ eye placement. Almost looks like the cover of the OST of "Panty and Stocking". A background setting might help the context... I've never thrown up (or bled) in such a sexy pose before
Better stop reviewing while I can.

[group randomness]

This is really nice

Please write some descriptions for some of these works you submit - I'm sure someone's going to ask...
It's been a while since I've seen such a large, detailed pencil drawing. You should absolutely try to color this! I can't tell what kinda apparitions are up on the right, but ... boobs are well shaded.

[Mio Akiyama]

Liken the eyes...

they could be a tad more defined. The careful shading on the hair and dress are amazing! Very pretty, nice job.

[Maru]

maru who?

Really like the shading and colors... not scouted yet? Couldn't vote on it. If you use finer lines on the finer details (like eyes and indentations) it'd look more fleshed out.

[Hellfest Poster]

Not what I expected

I thought Steve Jobs was the zombie (sans glasses and wussy beard)! Yeah, now I can see the resemblance .... wish I could attend; the beer here in the States is a miserable joke. The brow is slightly under-defined, even for the character you've captured. Maybe it's a shading thing. Worth a try on the scalp maybe even too.

[Elika-morrigan-cosplay]

you can fix the head

At least I recognize the characters by sight (a big plus in my book), and the attributes are well displayed. It's not your fault you like anime that have wide-ish heads.... well not Morrigan anyways. BG and shading

HOLIMOUNT responds:

thanks for the review mate heheh it pisses me off that you guys always find 30 mistakes i never even thougth about but oh well it had to happen aww thanks to that i think im making 1 more drawing of her dressed as Morrigan i hate it when i see you guys looking at my mistakes so i will have to redeem my self

[Faye Valentine]

Good luck at the convention

Excellent clean lines, great shading (one shade and not over the top). One star off for a very long belly button indentation.

['A Dogcart Raviolli']

Don't care how it's served

Subtle pastel colored shading. That's something you haven't done in a while. I wouldn't worry about the lack of reviews; most people only seen to comment when there are boobies and blood everywhere. May your plate overflow w/ raviolli and sauce and garlic bread.....

Butzbo responds:

Heheh, rrright, athough i uploaded this one on a period where the ArtPortal got stuck and this took a while to officially appear, then it didn't got much attention. OHWELL, thanksmen.