'It's not what you shade, but what you don't shade', this is a nice piece, but I can't help to think you gave up on detailing parts of his suit (below the chin area), because his head came out okay, didn't wanna risk switching gears from old flesh to old suit and tie... anyway, overly anal/critical review from me, 'cause I'm following you now ;)
OK wait, yeah the lighting's coming from above.. so his suit should be a lot darker, but then the whole scene would be a lot darker, and that's more pencil than this piece requires, so yup, good job on this!
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